| The definition has three fixed parts | the complete picture (psychological or cosmic) · a thinking that takes possession of the feelings · no outlet except the composed verse. Dropping “takes possession of the feelings” turns it into ordinary description | completepicturepsychologicalcosmic |
| Three elements, with their exact jobs | - wijdān gives sincerity and subjectivity · fikr gives precision
- ordering and tight joints · the expressive image carries them in words
- structures
- images
- figures and music
| wijdāngivessinceritysubjectivity |
| The four things that are not successful experiences | mere outward sense without involvement · imitation or copying · deaf mimicry of nature · occasion-poetry. “Occasion poetry” was also Mutran’s and al-Diwan’s chief complaint against the Revivalists — the two questions are linked | mereoutwardsensewithout |
| An experience need not be realistic | an imaginary one is valid if the poet is sincere about what he imagined and suffered. “Only realistic experience counts” is a wrong option | imaginaryvalidpoetsincere |
| The two imbalances and their named examples | - thought dominant → loss of the spirit and warmth of poetry (Sheikh Ali al-Laythi’s direct wisdom after the Urabi revolution)
- feeling dominant → mere emotional flow
- value lost (the poet who repeats “wāḥā… wāḥā” without effect on hearts)
| thoughtdominantlossspirit |
| The outcome when both are present | - rise
- wide human horizons
- permanence and immortality — memorise the wording of section 9 exactly
| risewidehumanhorizons |
| There is no special language for poetry | - the trap option is “poetry needs a particular vocabulary”. What matters is that a word achieves in its place what no other word could. The old standards are: clear and precise sense
- no discord of letters
- eloquent fronting and delaying
- mentioning and omitting
- emphasis
- and the links between sentences
| trapoptionneedsparticular |
| Four standards of a good image, in order | from the inner sense (not outward perception only) · material consistent with the feeling · an organic function toward delight and conviction · suggestion closer than outright statement | innersenseoutwardperception |
| Image types | - partial (one small idea via simile
- istiʿārah or kināyah) vs total (the artistic framework of the whole psychological experience)
- and the total is either conventional or inventive (new relations from delicacy of perception and penetration of insight)
| partialsmallideasimile |
| Music terms to place exactly | tafʿīlah from the root fa-ʿa-la · a set of feet = a baḥr · al-Khalil ibn Ahmad was the first to catalogue the modes · the science is ʿilm al-ʿarūḍ · rhyme = agreement in the final letter | tafʿīlahrootfeetbaḥr |
| The condition on the rhyme-word | - born of the subject
- settled in place
- not dragged in for the metre nor forced — this is the standard answer for “when is a rhyme acceptable”
| bornsubjectsettledplace |
| • | - Overt music is what the ear hears (metre
- rhyme
- ring)
- covert music is what the soul apprehends through the experience
- from the interaction and consistency of words
- phrases
- images and figures in one harmonic whole
| Overtmusicwhathears |
| • | - Artistic unity = unity of subject + unity of feeling + sequenced
- interlinked
- completing thoughts and images
- with each part doing its living function
- its effect is that the poem becomes a living being
- free of multiple aims and jarring parts. Historically it was called for by al-Diwan and taken up by Apollo
- Mahjar and the New school — not invented by Apollo
| Artisticunitysubjectfeeling |
| Text mapping to revise quickly | - Maya’s elegy = shock to defiance · “I Love You
- My Homeland” = love and ransom with dense images and agile music · “The Eagles” = two methods of life
- total symbolic image
- tafʿīlah music
- objective unity · Shawqi’s exile poem = many ideas inside one psychological unity
- with muʿāraḍah of an old poem
| Mayaelegyshockdefiance |